Book Blog Tour for Dancers in the Wind

books1Gamekeeper Turned Poacher  damppebbles book blog

The Long Journey to Publication Reading Room With a View

Hannah and Me  Bibliophile Book Club

Creating characters Off-the-Shelf Books

Q&A Author interview with Liz Loves Books

From Short Stories to Novels on First to Last Page

The Influence of Reading on Writing Linda’s Book Bag

My Inspiration Guest Post for A Lover of Books

What’s your first draft like? Murder to a Tea

With thanks to Liz Barnsley for arranging the book blog tour.

Dancers in the Wind is on sale in Foyles and other bookshops and can be ordered from Amazon UK or Hive Stores with free delivery.

From Romance to Crime

cropped-dancersinthewind.jpgMy last staff job was as Assistant Fiction Editor on Woman’s Weekly and Woman & Home – many years ago now. For a year before that I’d worked on a confessions magazine where I had my very first short story accepted and published. Strangely enough, that story involved a crime: blackmail with the perpetrator – the “I” of the confessional – ending up losing her job. Moral retribution.

Some of the serials we published in WW and W&H were written specifically for those magazines. Others were novels about to be published and serialised beforehand. Most were romances – although W&H allowed a wider remit and we had thrillers as well but always with a romantic perspective.

Most novels had to be abridged and each episode had to end with a cliff-hanger  – some novels lent themselves to this easily. Others had to be worked on. I also had to learn the art of the synopsis as each week or month we began with “The story so far…” And even though I became adept at this I still find it difficult to write synopses for my own work!

Romantic stories tend to be predictable ­– the skill is to keep the reader hooked regardless. So many people (not authors) have told me that writing a romance is easy. I’d like to see them try. They are really difficult to get right. And if you’re not sincere, this will be exposed in your writing.

During this time, I tried my hand at short stories but without success. It took me some time to find my “voice” although I was given some encouragement along the way. By the time I left IPC magazines, I had some good contacts and translated two books from French for WH Allen (one under a pseudonym as it was an erotic novel for which I had to learn a lot of new words!).

While freelancing as a journalist, I started writing tales with a twist for Bella and also wrote longer stories. A lot of the twist stories had an element of crime – from bigamy to murder – involved. I also wrote an historical crime story linked to Sherlock Holmes, which was published in Candis.

Then came the commission to interview a police officer and a prostitute at King’s Cross and the knock on the door in the middle of the night which started a trail of “what ifs” that eventually became Dancers in the Wind.

 I’ve always had a passion for reading crime fiction from Dickens and Wilkie Collins to Edgar Allan Poe and, of course, Arthur Conan Doyle. Patricia Highsmith,  Minette Walters and Sara Paretsky all feature in my list of favourites. There are some great crime writers around now – each one with different skills and perspectives ­– and I love reading them especially the police procedurals that I’d never attempt myself.

In my novels the police investigation is in the background while Hannah investigates from a journalist’s point of view although there is always a personal connection which leads her into harrowing situations. And just with a nod to my past editorial roles, there’s also just an element of romance.

Dancers in the Wind is on sale in Foyles and other bookshops and can be ordered from Amazon UK or Hive Stores with free delivery.

 

Balancing the books

simonlaunch12a-2-1September has been a strange month. As I have been completing drafts two and three of Death’s Silent Judgement, I have been writing guest blog posts and organising publicity for Dancers in the Wind, the first novel in the trilogy.

The positive early reviews on NetGalley for my début crime novel have given me more confidence while working on book two – as have the comments of the two beta readers who have been so generous in their praise.

It was rewarding reading the proofs for Dancers in the Wind as it served to reminded me of characters who reappear in Death’s Silent Judgement, some of whom have revealed different sides to their personalities. Meanwhile some characters in book two are nudging me, like starstruck actors, for a more substantial role in book three. At least one will have his wish come true.

It has taken me a long time to decide the fate of a couple of the main players in book two and I have been sad to lose them. I’ve also had to ditch a couple of my favourite scenes as they didn’t fit in with the narrative timeline.

But the real joy for me has been exploring the characters who have taken over, have trod their own path and have surprised me with their actions and lives! One character completely transformed and I shouldn’t have been surprised as there were clues along the way.

So Death’s Silent Judgement is almost ready to send off to Urbane Publications. One final read through and a few loose ends to tie up in the finale.

Meanwhile the launch parties are now arranged – just! – and I am full of first night nerves. But as with theatrical first nights there will be lots of friends to support me. The real test will be when Dancers in the Wind is on sale. Will readers enjoy it? I hope so as I have had such a great time writing it.

Dancers in the Wind is on sale in Foyles and other bookshops and can be ordered from Amazon UK or Hive Stores with free delivery.

First draft: Death’s Silent Judgement

Having just completed the first draft of the sequel to Dancers in the Wind, I thought it would be interesting to look back at the interview I did with Rebecca Bradley about first drafts nearly three years ago to see if my modus operandi had changed at all.

It would seem not judging by the answers I gave then. For Death’s Silent Judgement (to be published in May 2017 by Urbane Publications), I have concentrated during the first draft in getting words down on paper – or words on the computer file. I still edit a little as I go along especially correcting typos when I’m rereading a chapter or scene.

Now that I have the main bulk of the story written down, I have printed out the manuscript and oh how satisfying it is to see a pile of typed pages – even if some will have to be deleted later.

I have spent a day or so reading everything I have written and each character now has a page in my little blue book. One of the differences in writing this book is that, as a sequel, some characters have appeared in the first book and I have to make sure I get their details correct. Metaphorically, I am rolling up my sleeves to knock the story into shape.

First of all, I have to work on the timeline – as I neared the end of the story, I was writing some scenes ad hoc and now have to ensure the sequencing is accurate. There are gaps in the narrative which have to be explored and some themes need to be developed more fully. Several characters need developing (they are shouting at me to give them more scenes like demanding actors greedy for exposure) and sadly (for me) some themes or scenes may have to be scrapped or maybe completely changed. That’s always a tough decision.

I still remember a favourite scene of mine in Dancers in the Wind. I thought is was so scary and saw it completely visually. I was totally unprepared when my friend Sue who had read the MS as a beta reader, told me she thought I’d left something in that ought to have been deleted. It just made no sense to her (and to others I have to admit). So I rewrote the offending scene making it clear who the character was. I had wanted the identity to be uncertain but obviously ambiguity didn’t work.

With a pile of paper before me, I shall be physically moving scenes around to help the novel take shape, making notes on each chapter and joining the dots …

Rebecca Bradley Murder Down to a Tea What’s Your First Draft Like